In the majority of the pictures there is a main focus. In some
there are other smaller pictures but mostly there is one big picture taking up
most of the pace with only a small space to write in. generally the pictures
are mid shots with not a lot of colour.

This is good work. But you must pick up the pace of work as quickly as possible. The two contents pages do not relate well together and have pretty different layouts. Find a third contents page that clarifies how the layout could be.
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