Final double page spread

This is the plan I followed to to create my final double page spread, everything on the drawings is translated on the final product. The model is taking up the whole left side of the first page, there is then a quote next to the model in the middle right side of the page and then the first name of the model on the top middle and right third. On the second page his name takes up the whole top third of the page, and then the article follows. All ideas on my page have been translated from the drawings which were finally concluded from on previous drawings.